tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post7693044893993554780..comments2024-03-29T10:45:10.988+08:00Comments on Wazzup Pilipinas News and Events: Wazzup Pilipinas Original Short Stories Series: When It RainsWazzup Pilipinashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18436279836974039344noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-13230682634741580932015-03-02T22:24:19.155+08:002015-03-02T22:24:19.155+08:00A very heartbreaking story... This story has a goo...A very heartbreaking story... This story has a good plot but quite confusing on some parts. The ending was great. The author did a good job despite it being a little confusing. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17863868421620534886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-19353427146300180842015-03-01T21:41:26.264+08:002015-03-01T21:41:26.264+08:00The love story was very well written. The author m...The love story was very well written. The author made the story better by showing lots of emotions. Despite it being heartbreaking, it was great! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13340227296300927305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-30124790211796254702015-02-26T19:36:20.361+08:002015-02-26T19:36:20.361+08:00As a fan of love stories, I can say that the story...As a fan of love stories, I can say that the story was really nice and heartbreaking but some of the parts are a little confusing. But overall, it is a great work! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12979336268266020555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-20637773824538333732015-02-26T19:32:20.903+08:002015-02-26T19:32:20.903+08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12979336268266020555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-31983607171486887702015-02-25T15:51:56.117+08:002015-02-25T15:51:56.117+08:00I like the story. Great job!I like the story. Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07577603475863583192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-32267830553206302272014-12-02T06:04:35.038+08:002014-12-02T06:04:35.038+08:00The story is great though it’s a little confusing....The story is great though it’s a little confusing. The author can still improve this story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06340401417465924110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-60717043788113862662014-12-01T22:00:46.823+08:002014-12-01T22:00:46.823+08:00Honestly, it was quite a blur. I was kind of confu...Honestly, it was quite a blur. I was kind of confused with what Raven said, until I knew at the end that it was a lie. I don't know it the selective amnesia really connects to the story, or it just happened to be parallel.<br />Overall, I guess this story would be better if there were clearer descriptions and conversations. But this was a good read. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10126642876188172779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-58819831518353693832014-12-01T19:21:11.684+08:002014-12-01T19:21:11.684+08:00It was really a nice story, but I got confused in ...It was really a nice story, but I got confused in some parts of it. Your story has a good plot and I hope that you will continue to write other stories with a better plot, because I think you can be a great author.:) Just add more twists in your future stories so that many people will look forward to it. =)) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15075177151755150466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-26756606101794121482014-11-30T19:46:33.257+08:002014-11-30T19:46:33.257+08:00Since i'm a fan of love stories, I liked it! :...Since i'm a fan of love stories, I liked it! :) Great job! You just have to be detailed on the next story that you're going to write because some parts of this short story is not that detailed that's why it's confusing. But, this one is good! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750629164067871254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-33480777615079067732014-11-30T13:30:24.465+08:002014-11-30T13:30:24.465+08:00It was a great story and it was heartbreaking. The...It was a great story and it was heartbreaking. The ending was unhappy but it was cool. The author did a good job in writing this short story =)) I hope you will continue to write some short stories. <br /><br />-Andrea Celina GumbanAndrea Celina Gumbanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09033239019458145855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-69665802636317110512014-11-30T11:47:19.395+08:002014-11-30T11:47:19.395+08:00The story is appealing and as a fan of love storie...The story is appealing and as a fan of love stories, I like the emotions that have been showed in the story. :) I hope that the author will continue to write stories like this. It's a good start to more exemplary works in the future. It's nicely done! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14564327181551307490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-404427630724837302014-11-30T00:47:53.530+08:002014-11-30T00:47:53.530+08:00I like how you make it unpredictable though some p...I like how you make it unpredictable though some part of your story does not justify the other sequence that leads for the readers to be confused. Make it clear and add details for the readers to understand it. Anyway, your story is very interesting and its jelliclely great! :) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07639569876359780405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-56677341694506578622014-11-29T21:45:45.230+08:002014-11-29T21:45:45.230+08:00This story is heartbreaking. Even though I've ...This story is heartbreaking. Even though I've read that before. She just lied just to forget him, she must be a strong girl. Revenge and sacrifice. I think you should add more plot twists and details in your story. I like the way of writing. Good job! :)Nhicole Jhosel Franciscohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11552048970114288228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-11953342736773573882014-11-11T20:08:48.452+08:002014-11-11T20:08:48.452+08:00The story was great but on the first part the sequ...The story was great but on the first part the sequence of events is very confusing. Some parts didn't have its highlight that made it confusing but the plot twist in the latter part is great. But I think you could also write what happened before because the things just happened in one snapshot. I think you should add more details about the events and the characters. But it's well done! :))) Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02090079231146519802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-89405243132631403762014-11-09T19:50:03.412+08:002014-11-09T19:50:03.412+08:00A great story but I think something is missing. I...A great story but I think something is missing. I was confused on some parts but still I read it till the very end. The story made me curious while reading asking questions like "what happens next?" eager to know the rest of the story. Overall, great job! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00556901183967697218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-72670271726331654932014-11-05T04:28:47.789+08:002014-11-05T04:28:47.789+08:00The first part of the story was rather predictable...The first part of the story was rather predictable (especially the thing about the handkerchief). However, I liked the plot twist in the latter part of the story. I think it was really hard for the protagonist to choose whether to help John or just let him be, since it was his parents who killed protagonist's parents. The story tells us seeking for vengeance will do no good, it will just lead to more wrongdoings. And if you will seek for revenge, you will be just the same as the ones who did something bad to you. Great story! :)Alianna Gutierrezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12319661967787975315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-31621393599374480182014-10-26T19:43:26.761+08:002014-10-26T19:43:26.761+08:00I love the story but I think that it lacks suspens...I love the story but I think that it lacks suspense. The turn of events are just so sudden and I can't help but feel like the plot is all over the place. I actually enjoyed reading the start because it was more detailed and when it came to the middle part, it changed. The turn of events were just dropped like bombs and everything just happened so fast that I wasn't really able to feel the pain Raven was going through. But the story is great nonetheless, just a bit of revising and modifying here and there and it'll be good as new! :)<br /><br />-Paula B. MalloAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01068047836177409669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-44033928096108642332014-10-25T20:05:55.681+08:002014-10-25T20:05:55.681+08:00First, I'm somewhat not satisfied on some part...First, I'm somewhat not satisfied on some part of the story that needed more details like in John's situation, why did Kate leave him? I mean for what reason? Don't get me wrong okay? I'm just stating my opinion and don't worry I really like the story 'coz it's so unpredictable. Sometimes, it made me wonder what's going to happen next and that's a great thing because readers, like me, will not get bored. My favorite part of this story is when Raven said those lies to John. I really admire her courage. This story also show me the beauty of love where you can sacrifice your own happiness just for the happiness of your loved one. CARA LARIZE DE VILLAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15143237558580880836noreply@blogger.com