tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post5916649487353441306..comments2024-03-29T04:45:54.241+08:00Comments on Wazzup Pilipinas News and Events: Athena : The Goddess of WisdomWazzup Pilipinashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18436279836974039344noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-82469240747618218282013-07-31T18:38:03.057+08:002013-07-31T18:38:03.057+08:00For me, Athena is the best representation for woma...For me, Athena is the best representation for woman empowerment,too. Being tagged as the goddess of strategic war, she only affirmed that women can also enter the fields where men are dominant. <br /><br />Sentence Construction: I want to give the author a round of applause for writing such a short, yet expressive article. Aside from the error in usage of verb in the last paragraph, there is no other major mistake in the article that I could think of. I fell in love with the last part. Comparing Athena to a person who knows his limitations in using a gun was a great move!<br />Paragraph Organization: There are some thoughts which are repeated, but were rephrased. But all in all, the chronology of the paragraphs is understandable.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13239754385167232234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5453574383493832374.post-4695245523014899622013-07-23T18:45:04.049+08:002013-07-23T18:45:04.049+08:00Hi Mikaela! Like you I also admire Athena because ...Hi Mikaela! Like you I also admire Athena because of her wisdom. I agree with you that using your wisdom is the best way to solve problems or misunderstandings. Violence will only make things worse. Well, I like this article of yours about Athena, it is different from others who explained only the birth and some characteristics of Athena.<br /><br />Ruth Marienelle R. Balasabas<br />IV-BOYLE Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08718698459138807627noreply@blogger.com